Book blogger, audiobook lover and shamelessly honest reviewer. Mostly read fantasy, mystery, romance, UF and YA but all genres welcome.
I have high tolerance for most P&P fan fiction but this one was TERRIBLE! The idea was to make it a spicy version (sort of what happens after they married) but the "author" used a very convoluted style of writing with weird words all over. For example:
Propitious fortune allowed her to descry whom the crepuscular light yielded.
WTH is that supposed to mean?
Then she used some words that I even doubted were real, which I later confirmed when I looked for "discaution" in the dictionary and didn't find it. That proved just too much for me.